The abacus tic-tocs
counting the sunsets
from this moment
until the day
the world rises
with the sun
to fight back

~ dMarie


5 thoughts on “Rise”

  1. Good evening! I read your poem and I like it a lot. Very creative and to me self reflected of ones relationship against the world. I would love to feature this on my poetry blog. I will reblogged your post and hopefully others will come and read more of your work. Well done!


    1. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I’m humbled that you would like to share my poem and thank you for doing so. You have made my night!


  2. Reblogged this on kgbethlehem and commented:
    Good evening everyone and welcome to Friday Night Poetry Corner #105. This week’s feature poem is from a methodical poet name ~ dMarie with a poem called “Rise.” This creative joint makes you think and for that my readers come up with your own views of his poem. Please visit ~ dMarie page as well; you won’t be disappointed.

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